by Mark Cullen
Copyright 2019 Mark Cullen and Trackerati.com.
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All rights Reserved.
A single-sentence press release from IAAF
"On the request of USATF, the IAAF can confirm that Mr
Alberto Salazar’s IAAF World Championships accreditation has been
deactivated."
Teacher's assessment:
Clear focus, crisp writing, to the point.
Effective cause and effect
sequence.
Proper placement of comma.
Clear understanding of
possessive and where to place apostrophe.
Razor-like use of
"deactivated."
Invokes high moral and ethical
standards
Restores integrity, trust and
believability to track and field performances.
Aspirational.
A+
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